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Margaret C Nikoleit's avatar

Heartbreaking and lovely.

The In Between's avatar

This is so beautiful and so heartbreaking.

James (HVR)'s avatar

I don't even know.

Wow.

Brooklyn Crane's avatar

Ugh, that twist was jarring. Well done. I really appreciate the internal rhymes being the only ones changing on every first and third lines.

Sara da Encarnação's avatar

This is devastating precisely because it refuses ornament where ornament would weaken it.