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Brooklyn Crane's avatar

Some good trochaic propaganda at last! I love this poem, and I am sure my beloved will as well. Lines 2 and 3 of stanza 2 are my favorite and quite representative of what I feel the poem is about--that is, the contemplation of Nature for what it is: imminent death.

thE QuiET wEiGHt of InWArd TurMOIl caRRiED aWaY bY NAturE.

Rue Kream's avatar

"Spots of sunlight dappling detritus" <3

The Poet: Analisa's avatar

This is very enchanting and beautifully crafted.