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Elijah Dickinson's avatar

I rather like this one, although I don't think the spaces really add anything to the poem.

syntaxevasion's avatar

Brilliant.

"And so they grow, my lovely verses,

Blooming for a crowd of one.

And every time I add a line,

It seems a little bit less fun."

Life and Love spoke cruelty,

isn't it so -

everyone you love most,

you have to let go,

not seeking the age - our cost,

it is the person we lost.

Sometimes within,

some times with in - us

but love we all do -

love we still must.

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